Beta Issue 24

December 28, 2015

Review of Swan Deception by Gledé Browne Kabongo

by Katie Rose Guest Pryal       Reviewer Rating: 3 Stars      

Kabongo shows a lot of promise as an author, but this book needs an editor to help wrangle the plot lines, the characters, and the details. Not every character needs a dark secret to hold a reader’s interest, and sometimes less is more when it comes to plot. However: If you liked Desperate Housewives, if you can never have enough skeletons in the closet, if you cannot get enough of juicy secrets being revealed, then this is the book for you.


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