Chasing Shadows

The Star Hunters #1
February 26, 2014
GenreScience Fiction
Audience Adult, New Adult
Format Book Length Manuscript
Type General Fiction
Word Count 60-80k (average/short)

Editing, Production, Marketing & Sales

Cover design by Adam Burn Art
Published Through Amazon Createspace – KDP
Distributed by Smashwords

Reviewed on March 14, 2016

Review by Katie Rose Guest Pryal

The Rundown

At the beginning of Chasing Shadows, Lissa sits in a tree watching a star port, waiting for a ship’s passenger to arrive. While she waits in the dark, she thinks of the medical bills piling up for Aven, the only person who seems important to her—not counting her pet arkin, Blade, who isn’t even a person, but rather a large, winged feline animal that can form close bonds with humans. Blade and Lissa sit in shadows; the passenger appears; and with one shot to his skull, Lissa takes his life. After all, Lissa is a bounty hunter with bills to pay. But as she makes her way off world, her carefully planned escape falls apart. The smugglers she hired to take her back to her home world have sold her out—not realizing they were dealing with something far worse than Lissa herself.

So begins a space opera of the classic kind. It is galactic in scope, with a deep history of interstellar wars, and interplanetary life currently under an unsteady peace held by the police-like Star Federation. Early on, we watch a space battle in which a Star Fed ship led by a brilliant young commander, Lance, gets handily demolished by a mere ten enemy soldiers. The soldiers—assassins—appear to be a little bit more than human, just like their prey, Lissa. Who are these people? What do they want? To what ends are they willing to go to get it? The stage is set for that unsteady peace to fall apart.

Chasing Shadows was hard to get into at first, in part because the two main characters, Lissa and Lance, are both so self-possessed and reserved that their personalities not only keep other characters at a distance, but the reader as well. It is possible to write secretive characters who are instantly captivating—who, perhaps, share their secrets with readers more quickly than these characters do. Or perhaps having both main characters be secretive is just too tough to pull off. It is uncertain whether all readers will have the patience to get to know Lissa and Lance despite how intriguing they promise to be.

Once Lissa and Lance come fully into view, however, the book really takes off. At one point, they’re fighting over their next move, and Lance accuses Lissa of holding out on him. She takes him to task: “There will always be something I’m not telling you. Always. But what I do tell you will be the truth.”

Note: The book ends on a cliffhanger, setting up a series.

The Recommendation

Perfect for science fiction fans, especially those looking to dive into a new series. Both Lissa and Lance are compelling characters, and it is worth taking the time to get to know them. A great book.

The Rating Reviewer Rating: 5 Stars

5 Stars (out of 5): Highly recommended. This book did exactly what it set out to do, with originality, style, and maybe even a twist. It stands out next to popular, traditionally published novels in its genre.

The Pros & Cons

Pros: Believable, Characterization, Emotional, Strong World-Building
Cons: Starts slow

Author’s Summary


These are the words Star Federation soldiers live by as they work to uphold peace across the galaxy. Founded at the start of the Andromedan War, the Star Federation obliterated its opponents and now stands as the guardian of the galaxy. Its power has gone largely unchallenged in the wake of the war, and its officers now busy themselves with minor troubles. Once in a while, however, a powerful force surfaces and demands more attention, be it a drug lord, pirate crew, or a bounty hunter worthy of the Alpha Classification.

Following the assassination of one of the Star Federation’s officers, Fleet Commander Lance Ashburn goes on the hunt for the Alpha Class bounty hunter known as the Shadow. One of the best officers the Star Federation has ever seen, Commander Ashburn comes closer than anyone ever has to eliminating the Shadow, but upon meeting her, he discovers that much larger and more dangerous enemies roam the stars. Enemies that even hunters fear.

Determined to do his duty as a Star Federation officer, Commander Ashburn fights for the galaxy, but the price of enduring peace may be one that the Shadow is not willing to pay.

Tethered to her own demons, bounty hunter Lissa aka the Shadow has seen the harsher side of the Star Federation, and her priorities do not include carrying out the agenda of a fleet commander. When her past catches up with her, however, Lissa must either surrender herself, or make a stand. Working with and against Commander Ashburn, Lissa could push the galaxy into war… or save it.

Short Description

A bounty hunter and a military officer must form an unstable alliance under the looming threat of galactic war.


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