Daydreams and Devils

June 25, 2015
Audience Adult
Format Book Length Manuscript
Type General Fiction
Word Count 40-60k (short)

Editing, Production, Marketing & Sales

Workshopped with The Indie View
Edited by Stephanie Dagg
Published Through Amazon Createspace – KDP
Distributed by Amazon

Reviewed on April 25, 2016

Review by Chantelle Atkins

The Rundown

On the surface this is a gritty, action packed crime thriller, full of colorful characters, brilliant dialogue and dark humor. A tale of gangsters, violence, clubs, drugs and women. However, it is actually a lot more than that, with an equally riveting and at times, very touching, coming-of-age style story line running adjacent to the gangster one. In the first few chapters we are introduced, one by one, to the main characters. Vincent, is the boss of a criminal gang, who is taking over local businesses one by one. Frankie is his knuckle headed, devoted and psychotically violent henchman. Johnny is a younger employee in the process of climbing up the gangster ranks. James is a young man who has just left education, and decided to start a band. It was his story which really drew me into the book, and made it one I was very reluctant to put down. James is a huge music fan, (and from the amount of fantastic musical references which fill this book, I can assume the author is too) a talented singer, and about to become the front man of Strangeways, a band he hastily throws together with the three lads who answer his ad. For the majority of this novel, the two story lines run alongside each other. One moment you are chilled by the disturbing and extreme violence Vincent and Frankie subject their rivals to, and in the next breath you are warmed and touched by the somewhat innocent and poignant beginnings of the boys band. The author does a great job of moving between the two worlds, whilst expertly building up the pace and tension, as you try to predict when and how they will collide. I very much liked the character of James. He came across as a bit uptight and serious at times, but was also a boy on a mission to fulfill his dream, whilst proving his unsupportive dad wrong. I enjoyed the humor and authenticity of the bandmates rehearsals, attempts at song-writing and the descriptions of their first gigs. The ending of this book was handled very well. The character’s lives become inevitably entwined, and the tension builds, and you desperately, desperately want the good guys to win! It had a particularly satisfying ending which left me smiling, and I would certainly like to read more from this author.

The Recommendation

This book will appeal to readers who enjoy gangsters and crime thrillers, as well as dark humor. It does, however, have a lot more to offer than that. There are unique and believable characters, and two intriguing story lines which keep you hooked and guessing as to when they are going to tangle. Anyone who enjoys coming-of-age style stories would also enjoy this book, not to mention anyone who thinks of themselves as a music fan. Also for fans of very British books/films. It is described as Goodfellas meets The Commitments, but felt more like Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels meets The Commitments.

The Rating Selected as a Top Pick!

Top Pick! 5 Stars (out of five): Freaking amazing. Any agent or publishing house that passed this one up made a big mistake. It was selected by our reviewer as a personal favorite. This is also a nomination for our Novel of the Year award.

The Pros & Cons

Pros: Characterization, Page Turner, Plot, Prose, Strong World-Building
Cons: Extreme Violence

The Comparisons

For readers who liked these books and authors: Irvine Welsh, Roddy Doyle, The Commitments

Author’s Summary

Amazon UK No1 bestseller ‘Daydreams and Devils’ blends crime, coming of age and dark humour.
Vincent, with his sadistic right hand man Frankie, seeks to expand his interests with his own brand of gangland psycho terrorism.
James, a young music obsessive, leaves school determined to do life his way, dreaming of glory in a gang with guitars.
But as two worlds collide will dreams become nightmares?


Short Description

Vincent with sadistic right hand man Frankie, seeks to expand his interests with his own brand of gangland psycho terrorism. Music obsessed James leaves school determined to do life his way, dreaming of glory in a gang with guitars. As two worlds collide, will dreams become nightmares?


A gritty British drama, mixing crime, coming of age and dark humour

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